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love in lingering
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love in lingering |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Unbeknownst, to all it creeps, foreshadow--highlight laughter's weep each day to seek a moment's peace as accusations line my bed. Where now do I rest my head? Marble, cold, in pillow's stead. And all our dreams a map's pushpin, re-routing path to suit my whim in agony of heart in bleed, I wish that I could ache in stead. But such grace, it must be earned, the shiver'd shake of fever's burn I wish that I were holy, true-- that by faith, my hands heal you. But my father, I know this. My life began in loving kiss. Blessed I, in hold of hand Blessed I, to understand. My lips in touch of old hand's grace, my memory's etching of your face. As my life began this way... with love, a kiss-in nurturing I thank you that it end this way. Love in lingering each day. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 04-18-2001).] |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
beautiful! And not a piece to be read lightly and forgotten. Many subtle nuances to tease the mind. Great job. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
WOW Karen...your writing is growing hon..it's a pleasure to watch... into the library with this piece...  KAll obscurity starts with a danger: |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I wish that I were holy, true-- that by faith, my hands heal you. But my father, I know this. My life began in loving kiss. Blessed I, in hold of hand Blessed I, to understand. My lips in touch of old hand's grace, my memory's etching of your face. As my life began this way... with love, a kiss-in nurturing I thank you that it end this way. Love in lingering each day. ============================= no words will do this ones intent justice hugs & love me twin. I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Big hugs to you~ Thinking of you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
This is awesome in flow and touching of heart. Great job, done well. Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you all for your kindness. This is another for my dad. Sorry I have been so absent lately--as always appreciate your reading, and will be popping in when I can. HUGS to all. |
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