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The Ageless Dream
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The Ageless Dream |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Ageless Dream Oh mother hen, Oh mother when Can I step out the babies pen. For I have grown of age by law And he is just beyond the door. I see a magic world outside Just waiting me a loving bride. I would this kingdom be it's queen It is a vision I have seen. I'm ready for this knight to come And to this one I will succumb. I'll know him by the oath he swears And by my favors that he'll wear. I'll stake my life upon this troth This lovers oath sworn by both. Like generations through the years Dispite your second thoughts and fears. I know this is a dream to you But I would have the dream come true. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
For I have grown of age by law And he is just beyond the door. I see a magic world outside Just waiting me a loving bride. =========================== I'm ready for this knight to come And to this one I will succumb. ========================== I'll stake my life upon this troth This lovers oath sworn by both. Like generations through the years Dispite your second thoughts and fears. I know this is a dream to you But I would have the dream come true. ================================ out of the mouths of babes, huh sweet father Sy?  and tho its hard to let them go, she must chase her dreams ... these you've written in loving rhyme schemes. We dream these happily ever afters for ourselves... and then later for our children. beautiful poem of parental love Sy-babes.  me |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Oh it's so hard to let them go and make mistakes that they'll make. They just can't wait to spread their wings. |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Wonderful, Sy! I enjoy your distinctive style.  "Often the test of courage is not to die but to live" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, out of the mouths of babes.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Winkiewinkie, Stinky love ya into2B, That's the way it is, thanks for the read. Just A Women, Thanks for the wonderful. Sunshine, Yes, *L* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
superb as always Sy. . . excellent. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Sven your not to bad yourself. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Very nicely done, Seymore. Enjoyed the "off-rhymes" you used. S Arthur Whose Night is this, Mine or the Moon's? |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
OK, SY... If you're gonna be that way about it... I'll hop on a plane & fly to Florida & come knocking on your door....  Oh... I like this poem, btw.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
S. Arthur Grey. I thank you sir. Nan, No need to knock the door is open. *L* |
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