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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-04-17 12:50 PM

Fog steals silently
Landward as if on cat’s paws
All enveloping

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

1 posted 2001-04-17 01:23 PM

So much said in three lines. Excellent.

"I am not now that which I have been."

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

2 posted 2001-04-17 01:33 PM

Good one, interloper, but now I'm going to take a turn at it.

S Arthur

Whose Night is this, Mine or the Moon's?
J.E.James

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-04-17 02:49 PM

mist enveloping
as cool fog then interlopes
across graying shores

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

4 posted 2001-04-17 02:53 PM

hugged by fog.....nice...helen

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-04-17 08:48 PM

InterLoper~

Stealthily lifting
Shroud of gray is almost done
Burn off takes it down
Pitter-patter, kitty cat
Paw prints all over the lawn

To lend one's self to such inspiration is a blessing.
Thank you for your thoughts.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

6 posted 2001-04-17 09:18 PM

Ohh...
A breathtaking haiku, sir.

Enjoyed very much.

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2001-04-18 12:36 PM

I really Love this....beautiful...

Lauren~

***

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

8 posted 2001-04-18 12:57 PM

I love haikus. Probably because I can't write one to save my life! This is very well written. Thanks for sharing.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2001-04-18 04:59 PM

love the fog.....

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

10 posted 2001-04-18 05:08 PM

moon mired in a mist
stealing stealthily a kiss
shadows raising bliss

[This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 04-18-2001).]

BrightStar
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 219

11 posted 2001-04-19 01:18 PM

Wonderful haiku.

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