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PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2001-04-17 09:08 AM

You should have listened
When I told you to leave
You should have left
When I begged you please
I could have been a different man
I could have risen from stricken knees

There’s no answer to
The wind’s whispered riddle
There’s no more room
With me caught in the middle
Time keeps destroying us
Little by little

Let love lead us
Further down
Our own Jesus
Let love lead us

I should have listened
To the night’s cold warning
Just as another couple
In passion warming
Woke to find themselves
In the midst of morning

Unlike a fairy tale
With a hidden meaning
And so much desire
Still in feeling
What choice other than
Living or leaving?

Let love lead us
Further down
Our own Jesus
Let love lead us

Somewhere between love and lust
Let love lead us

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-04-17 09:13 AM

Oh, this leaves vivid imagery that you are still down on your knees....

an excellent write! Thank you!

PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

2 posted 2001-04-17 11:40 AM

Well it depends on what I am doing on my knees, but yes....thanks sunshine.

Poet deVine

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3 posted 2001-04-17 08:08 PM

Is this meant to be a song? It sure reads like one...you should try to find someone who'll write a melody for it. Excellent poem!

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-04-17 08:19 PM

PK. . . you know that I loved this one. . .

thanks. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JLR
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since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

5 posted 2001-04-17 08:36 PM

Breathless! And speechless to express my awe of this!

Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter

SEA

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6 posted 2001-04-18 04:42 PM

this is fantastic....

and your reply to Sunshine....let's the mind wander........

SEA

PoeticKnight
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New Orleans, LA

7 posted 2001-04-18 04:46 PM

wander Sea...wander *L*

SEA

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8 posted 2001-04-18 05:01 PM

believe me.....I did

PoeticKnight
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Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

9 posted 2001-04-18 05:13 PM

Fill me in...please *S*

SEA

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with you

10 posted 2001-04-18 05:17 PM

shame on you.....

they'd end up moving this to adult

PoeticKnight
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Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

11 posted 2001-04-18 05:20 PM

Or moving us somewhere *S*...a nice thought I'm having.

Sunshine

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12 posted 2001-04-18 05:25 PM

Ahem!

SEA

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13 posted 2001-04-18 05:26 PM

.........sorry Sunshine

* sheepish grin*

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