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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 ~*~Rainbow~*~Mirrored misty edges mutually soar upwards, in a nebulous arch, flaring across a drizzly dusky pale blue sky, exquisitely displaying magical singular hues in harmonic bands. Priceless artful seductress deceiving the foolish to presume to unearth mysterious treasure at whimsical prismatic ends. Value is within the beauty spread wide across the sky ‘tis but a promise, ‘tis but a message ‘tis the truth engagingly enrobed in spectral tones enticing eyes below, fixating on the splendor, unconsciously aware pondering messages veiled in the angelic hues of its archway so surreal. A wish in multi-colored hues sifting through mist of morn settling on mind's eye to warm heart's dark embers and brighten a soul. ~*~ Mysteria ~*~ © Copyright 2001 All Rights Reserved Photo: Archives - City of Grande Prairie, Alberta, Canada ~*~ I write, therefore I am ~*~ |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
A lovely write and the style is all you. I enjoyed this peaceful poem. Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Really pretty !  Works for me ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Two things I've always been crazy about: rainbows and jet streams. May you always find gold at the end of the rainbow. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mysteria....less is more.....and well proven here! This is a wonderful delight! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Koko: Thank you for reading. Marge: As I was writing it I was thinking bet if Marge did one, it would have all the colors of the rainbow in the text! I love rainbows. Julian: Nice thought but I always seen to find a mud puddle! Sunshine: Less is more. I just can't consistently seem to do it, but if I read yours long enough I may learn to leave out unnecessary words, thanks for reading and your guidance. Vandana: Thank you. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is beautiful, I love the picture....rainbows are a beautiful sign.... enjoyed greatly... Lauren~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 04-18-2001).] |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Greeneyes, I am so glad if it made you smile, thank you. |
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