Open Poetry #13 |
Calm |
Embers_Before_God Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 101USA |
With pain captured upon my hand, I blow it from my palm, hoping to destroy the final strand and find the world still calm. TkB Copyright © 2001 All Rights Reserved Dance with me under the moon. Touch my pale skin. Devour me. Love me. [This message has been edited by Embers_Before_God (edited 04-17-2001).] |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Dust in the wind! Let it go! this was short , but oh so deep. I kept it take care |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I like this!!! Very cool! |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Simple sweet and wonderful. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Embers....interesting thought. I liked this. Bob |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
Intelligent, intriguing and inspiring! Keep on writing. ^*~Kicking Kim~*^ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
embers...this IS a wonderful thought...i loved it!!! helen |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Oh, how can I type as I am applauding so?!? This is absolutely wonderful, strong and powerful, and perfectly worded. This is a fantastic poem. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. |
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Embers_Before_God Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 101USA |
koko--thanks for keeping it Brad--I'm glad you liked it. Julian--Too kind, but thanks Bob--thank you very much Kim--I appreciate it Helen--I am so glad you liked it. dragonpoe--Thanks, but no applause...I'm quite shy |
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