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I am/You are - a favorite oldie, but goodie
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I am/You are - a favorite oldie, but goodie |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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I Am/You Are I am the yin to your yang… the breath in your bubble… You are the because to my why… the reflection in my eyes… I am the curled fingers in your hand… You are the beat in my heart… You are the ring in my bell… the light in my eyes… I am the dreams in your slumber… the beacon on your shore… You are the dare in my dreams… the lilt in my voice… I am the warmth in your arms… You are why I know there is a God… and the reason for angels… the source of my pride… the swell in my heart… I am the horizon to your journey… your partner in life's dance… summer rain to your parched lips… You are the beam in my moon… I do not want to be, without You You want I, to make two to be one I am the yin to your yang… You are the because to my why… ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 26 June 2000 |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Beautiful, Sunshine....you must be the same to them.  |
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Possum Junior Member
since 2001-03-20
Posts 23 |
I loved this poem. I was just sitting here talking to my husband, laughing and saying how happy I was, and then I came across your poem. I have to keep this one as it represents everything I am feeling at this moment. Thank You for putting words to my emotions. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I make a quick late (very late) visit to read this and now I'll sleep very well = it really is a 'goodie'  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Of course it is a goodie... Regards to you O Karilea, Sudhir |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Who knows why the powers that be place two people across each other's paths. Perhaps for this. |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Oh wonderful!!! I'm so glad you reposted this. I'm saving. Excellent, Sunshine! "Often the test of courage is not to die but to live" |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
This was fun to read,, thought i would bump for others to read. Bernie A Smile a day keeps the world 'g.Bernie Slicker |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari dear heart, I truly love this, it may be an oldie but it's beautiful, I know I always say you are a superior writer and this proves it. Never do you fail to lift me love. Utterly utterly wonderfu' Take care love as always Puck  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I was just gonna say that You took the words right off my lips like a stolen kiss.And, the kiss really wouldn't be stolen... Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--This is the way it's supposed to be. |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
sunshine, you speak of true love perfectly, this is how it should be in order to survive, I really enjoyed this |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~  'You are the beam in my moon…' YEAH .... that's it ! !  Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know...I always wondered what it would be like to be in a happy marriage now I know. How lucky you are, and thanks for sharing the feeling so others who are not in one, know the difference! |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Thanks for the post. This one I am saving. Red |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful, Sunshine!! All writing comes |
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