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If you only knew
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If you only knew |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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If you only knew... would you shake your head and walk away, or would you wrap me up inside your arms, to stay? If you only knew... Would you laugh at how I fantasize, or would you share the dreams you’d find, behind my eyes? If you only knew... Would you think that I am too naive, or would you love me more for what my heart believes? If you only knew... Would you take your love away for real, or would you take my hand, and tell me how you feel? If you only knew... That my heart’s now yours...so you might not know, that I tried to run...it won’t let me go... So I wish you knew... How very much... I love you... Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
OOOOOOo I really like this, Sunnyone! The risk of love . . .! Well done. Krawdad |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, Sunnyone... even if it makes me long for the days when I still wondered about the answers. Well done! |
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Coal Surrender Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 84U.S. |
curious and passionate questions, each stanza moved me deeply. Coal |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Krawdad... There is always a risk, in everything...but it's a risk one must take nonetheless!! Thank you for your nice reply!!! Hi Suthern... Yes...I have looked back also and cherished the moments when the answers came. Those are some of my best memories!! Thank you, my friend!! Hi Coal Surrender... If this moved you deeply, than I am most grateful to my muse who took a liking to this poem!! Thank you......I'm glad to meet you!!  Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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