Open Poetry #13 |
The Rhythm |
Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
Take my hand, and dance with me in time. The rhythm of the night Matching the steps of our hearts. A soft samba, A beguiling beguine. Move with me Together as one Flowing across the floor. Spinning Twisting Twirling Hearts beating, Feet moving, Bodies twisting. All in time To the rhythm of the night. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Good to see you again, I feel the beat! Kathleen Blake |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PassionsVoice~ Ah ... Diana~ 'A beguiling beguine. Such a beguiling phrase ! Wonderfully presented. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I have always loved the rhythm of the night *s nice, Diana ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Coal Surrender Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 84U.S. |
Carefree, and frolicking steps of rhythmic bliss. Coal |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very gentle, tender, sweet sounds of music are drifting.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds like lots of fun...James |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Holding a pretty girl with music in the moment ... I wouldn't know if I was dancing or not, until the paramedics woke me from the coma nicely written |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
Irish Rose, thank you, it's nice to be back. As the song says, "The Beat Goes On"!! Marge, thank you! I'm glad that you liked this. Wynter, I'm just learning about it for the first time, but it's wonderful. Coal, yes, quite carefree!! Thank you. James, it is. Care to dance?? Rex, now, I would hope that you wouldn't pass out on me on the dance floor!?! Thank you Sir!! passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
PV, this one makes me want to dance!! LOL. Wonderful write and welcome back!! All writing comes |
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