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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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Last time I felt this way I gave everything I could Only to find out that what I gave Was not nearly enough I am frieghtened, im scared I want to hide away from me So I cant stuff it all up again I want to find out what can be Maybe it'll be different this time My heart is alot to give I wont be quick to share it How hard it is to trust Especially when my fear inside Grows stronger as my heart weakens Lessons I am learning The hardest ones of all I will not let him win though I have much more to give I will share me in time When I can again trust myself |
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Coal Surrender Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 84U.S. |
Pulling the dagger from the heart, great closing lines. Coal |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I want to hide away from me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Interesting line. Interesting indeed. You write so well. Please favor us with more. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and hopefully, that will be soon. . . excellent Whiskey, welcome back. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Especially when my fear inside Grows stronger as my heart weakens" You've captured so many of the questions, fears and anticipation that so many have felt Whiskey ... very nicely done, I enjoyed this heartfelt verse.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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forgotten_soul New Member
since 2001-04-06
Posts 5australia |
may sunshine and smiles fill your days when you find the trust you are looking for |
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