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rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

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0 posted 2001-04-15 11:02 PM

The Light Changes

I silently watch
As the light changes.

The dawn of a new morning
The sun’s new rays of light
Kissing the sleeping earth’s ground
The peaceful silence around me
Interupted by thoughts of you.

I silently watch
As the light changes

Cars and people hurriedly moving
Rushing through their day
Without a second thought.
And all I can feel is my heart breaking
With memories of you.

I silently watch
As the light changes

The comforting tranquil blackness
Of another night of slumber
Settles on the earth surroundings
And your face follows me
Into my bitter sweet dreams.

I silently watch
As the light changes.

Another new beginning
A brisk start to fresh day
Another chance at living life.
All I can feel emptiness.
And all I can do is go on as

I silently watch
As the light changes.

TaraB

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

1 posted 2001-04-16 10:12 AM

Rosepetals25.......As softly expressed as the light you describe. And I even saw the glint of a rainbow. Very nice. Bob

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
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2 posted 2001-04-16 10:15 AM

Ah yes, this pleases me very much! Thank you!

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-04-16 06:51 PM

now all you have to do is to let the light shine into your heart. . .

excellent. . .

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Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2001-04-16 06:55 PM

"The comforting tranquil blackness
Of another night of slumber
Settles on the earth surroundings
And your face follows me
Into my bitter sweet dreams."

What a tender mood of reminiscence you've captured in this lovely piece RosePetals, very nicely written!

Best wishes,
/Kit

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

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5 posted 2001-04-16 10:50 PM

Bob - Thank you.. I'm glad you stopped in to read

Sunshine - Well thank you for stopping by and enjoying my poem.

Sven - I don't know when there will be light in my heart again... I guessing not for sometime... but I'm glad you liked the poem.. thank you.

Kit - Thank you for your nice compliments... I'm happy you liked it.

TaraB

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