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Open Poetry #13
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poertyman2002
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 32
Florida, US
0 posted 2001-03-25 06:22 PM

If I knew just who you were.
If I knew you and her.
Yes.
No.
But if...
I want...
Please don't...!
You will be okay! I know you will.
Forget....!
It's...!
Salvation is please thank you and a compliment.

Poetry is sweet. Sweeter than sugar? Yes, Sweeter than me, maybe.
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-03-25 07:08 PM

Well Brian, you've got me thinking on this one....
Tennessee Angel
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 661
Tennessee
2 posted 2001-03-25 09:40 PM

Makes ya go Hmmm.... First time I read it, almost felt like two people were talking...I really like this..I'll have to read it again and attempt to decipher..
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