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For Him ............................................... [repost]
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For Him ............................................... [repost] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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For Him She came to him, there, and entered deep his soul and felt now he, awash, as if upon a craggy shoal she swept words to his heart, as if they had been tethered there, forever, shall she be, until the end of never she breathed breath into his heart, where she lightly stroked a chord, a spell, a place not met, but where he stoked the flame of her in his voice, and again then in his rhyme to promise between the two of them, yes, there’ll be the time where they shall meet and gaze and whisper, a kiss upon her ear and he shall know just how to sweep her up in midnight’s clear and lay her upon the rose-strewn bed, a bower made for her and she shall shower him anew, he has never been so sure. She came to him, there, and entered deep his soul She breathed breath into his heart, where she lightly stroked And they shall meet and gaze and whisper, a kiss upon her ear And she will hold his heart so soft, and whisper to him, “dear”. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 04-16-2001).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
"deer"? Did she say "deer"? Huh? Oh, "dear".  Nuts...Aside from that obvious misspelling, the poem is beautiful, Sunshine, smooth-flowing and gentle on the ear..   |
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Coal Surrender Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 84U.S. |
Soft and cherished touches on the soul, a lovely piece. Coal |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh My!!! This is so beautiful!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You are shining bright on this one. Lovely *L* |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
absolutely super! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karie dear heart, Oh yes this is perfectly divine. So beautiful my talented wise and gifted sister. This is my utter favourite of yours, truly outstandingly beautiful I love it dear one Take care love as always Puck  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Well, isn't he lucky!  |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
oh me, oh my!!!! how very lovely, my friend!!! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Whoever this was written for is a fortunate fellow. If not written for womeone special, then just one more example of your challenging creativeness. 1derful! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
she breathed breath into his heart, where she lightly stroked a chord, a spell, a place not met, but where he stoked the flame of her in his voice, and again then in his rhyme to promise between the two of them, yes, there’ll be the time where they shall meet and gaze and whisper, a kiss upon her ear and he shall know just how to sweep her up in midnight’s clear and lay her upon the rose-strewn bed, a bower made for her and she shall shower him anew, he has never been so sure. ======================== Sun this is so very very lovely!! what a beautiful gift of inspire "the flame of her in his voice, and again then in his rhyme to promise between the two of them, yes, there’ll be the time" that verse got me...and now I will say IwishIhadwrotethis awesome poem K!!! In another life...I know I loved you then |
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