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Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-03-22 02:26 PM

Bring me home

now that you
have left again
and taken with you
all our when
should you come back
and I be gone
know that my spirit
lingers on

bring me home
in thought of you
in all you say
and all you do
bring me home
and into your heart
where I might live
and be one part

bring me home,
there, in your smile
and keep me safely
all the while
and never tarry
in thought of me
as I would keep
you company

bring me home
in palm of hand
‘tho you hold another
and love is grand
as you share
the all of you
with a newer love
so true

bring me home
where I belong
never knowing
what went wrong
only allowing
that once we were
two as one
in love so pure

so bring me home
I’ll take little space
there in some
forgotten place
nestled in a corner
of your heart
where love was born
where love did start

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-03-22 03:15 PM

bring me home
in palm of hand
‘tho you hold another
and love is grand
as you share
the all of you
with a newer love
so true

bring me home
where I belong
never knowing
what went wrong
only allowing
that once we were
two as one
in love so pure

so bring me home
I’ll take little space
there in some
forgotten place
nestled in a corner
of your heart
where love was born
where love did start
==========================

a bittersweet song you sing here my Lady ...
that last verse sings harmony of the heartstrings.
well done gentle poetess.

oh you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
my body aches to breathe your breath
your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

Wilfred Yeats
Member Elite

since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

2 posted 2001-03-23 03:39 PM

who could not - only a cad - White is your color - true is your name - you deserve a lasting shared love - to carry you forward
with only glances baxk

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

3 posted 2001-03-23 03:57 PM

He had better bring you home, before someone else does......

Nice write

Bernie

a

a day keeps the world

'g.

Bernie Slicker

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

4 posted 2001-03-23 04:13 PM

LIW, this is so sad and beautiful, makes me want to bring you home. *L*

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-03-23 04:25 PM

Its not like he has forever...before a tasty new love appears on the horizon...James

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

6 posted 2001-03-23 11:37 PM

The soul longs for a place to be complete...
The heart longs for a place to be loved...
one can only hope that they are one in the
same and that we find it before the end of
time... Exquisite writing L.I.W. you weave
like an angel...may you soar~

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

7 posted 2001-04-07 08:40 AM

Janet Marie, thank you for singing along with me...

No, Mr. Yeats, no glances back...

Thank you bernie...

PoeticKnight, you are too kind...

JamesMichael, so true...

What a lovely comment, Butterflies...thank you...

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