Open Poetry #13 |
I Am a Snow Woman (by Alicia, doreen's daughter- 8 years old) |
AliciaRose New Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 8 |
I am a snow woman on a cold day. I'd rather drink hot chocolate in winter. I wear mittens to keep my hands warm in winter. I'd rather go sledding when it snows. It's best when school is delayed. Winter is my favorite season. I like the snow. I am a snow woman [This message has been edited by AliciaRose (edited 03-25-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Me too! This is excellent! SEA |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hi Alicia - How are you, sweetie??? This poem is pretty ... Like winter... Nice to see you writing again.. Let's see some more??? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AliciaRose~ You take the snow .... I'll take the hot chocolate ! Mmmmmmm ! With LOTS of marshmallows ! ! Meet ya' in the middle ! This is WONDERFUL, young lady ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Give me a quilt, and I'll watch you through the windows! I'm ready for some warm! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~This is excellent! Guess what,...my name's Alicia too, AND, I like the snow. (lots). . Great work! Fun Read. *Peace. |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I guess someone has to like snow - so I'm glad you do. But I like soft warm spring breezes!!!! |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I'm with Marge, you can have all my snow, sweetie and build a whole snow family! Very good poem and nice to meet you! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I say, let's go out and build some snow people!!! wonderful!!! ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Your poem is wonderful, Alicia. I love the snow too. Can I come out and build snow men with you. Doreen, it's good to see the talent has been passed on. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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desperado Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312FT Hood,Tx |
hey alicia! It's me, James. Nice to see you writing again. greetings from korea! tell ya what, ask you mom to email me your address and I'll send a postcard to you, and your mom. wonderful piece though, I love the snow too. perhaps someday we can make some snow people and have some fun. sound good? Keep writing so I can keep reading. People demand freedom of speech to make up for the freedom of thought which they avoid. --Soren Kierkegaard |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
AliciaRose~(what a pretty name) It's so good to see an eight year old who loves wintertime and poetry! I love hot chocolate with great big marshmellows too! I am sure that your mom is very proud of your talent! Keep up the good work, and do share more poems with us~ "it's best when school is delayed" ======================== When I was your age, I lived for that but, don't tell your Mom that okay?! Take care, Melissa~ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
beautiful, baby!!!!! iLOVE you..... keep writing your awesome beautiful verse.... and painting and drawing those beautiful pictures.... goodnight, baby... sleeptight... sweet dreams... god bless you.... see you tomorrow... ioveyou |
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