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Open Poetry #13

Row Row Your Time

monique
Member

since 2000-02-03

Posts 369
Louisiana

0 posted 2001-03-25 05:21 PM

Joyless over your situation
Above the earth
I can see your temporary home
Melting slowly
Invaluable time
Enclose in a silver fence

monique

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-03-25 05:37 PM

this is just sad to me......very well expressed

SEA

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Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

2 posted 2001-03-27 11:27 AM

You write such intriging poems..makes me want to know more about you.

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

3 posted 2001-03-27 11:33 AM

~Monique,...glad to get the chance to read you, I find this write so full,...and heavy. So privately somber. (If that makes sense). Thank you for sharing. *Peace.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-03-27 07:28 PM

you do wonderfully with these short forms my friend . . .

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Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

5 posted 2001-03-28 05:41 PM

Hi Monque,

Hey you MISSED you Muches, I am thinking you have been busy of late, this is very thought provoking and could be applied to my life as well, enjoyed much, want to go dancing?

How are those angles of yours, talk to you soon,

Love, cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

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