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Cool Waters (Haiku) |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 ~*~ Cool Waters ~*~Escorting the ship ~*~ Knot after knot after knot ~*~ Dolphins dive and leap Art: Linda Thompson ~*~ Cool Water ~*~ ~www.word-wide-art.com~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 04-13-2001).] |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Simple and direct. Loved the graphics and the haiku. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Thanks Julian, the idea came from a day at the Aquarium. ~*~ I write, therefore I am ~*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A couple of years ago I visited Tampa...had the opportunity to go sailing for the first time...dolphins indeed escorted the vessel... I have longed wish to write about that splendid moment... but you just did! Thank you! |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Pretty as a picture! *S* Chanson~ |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I just love a haiku, they are so easy to read. You did a wonderful job. Enjoyed it alot |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ You captured just the loveliest of moments ! And to swim with the dolphins is a joy I have known !  There is a oneness of spirit in them. Beautiful piece/peace ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Crisp, clean, cool! |
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