Open Poetry #13 |
A Night in Paris |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
In Paris, the city of lovers Is where you will find me Under the lamplight on the bridge Is where I will be Wearing a black cocktail dress With a rose between my teeth I glance down at my watch Was it 7:30 we said we'd meet? The distant sound of traffic On the busy street below As the moon shimmers on the water Of the Seine river as she flows The Notre Dame Cathedral What a spectacular sight at night As this truly beautiful city Is blanketed by so many lights In the distance I see the Eiffel Tower Such a magnificent sight to behold As I wrap my arms around me As I'm beginning to feel the cold A kiss on my neck Lets me know that you're here Then you wrap your jacket around me Ever thoughtful - so dear As we walk arm in arm Along the Champs Elysees I stop and turn towards you There is something I want to say When I spend time with you I feel like I'm walking on air There's no need for me to worry Just as long as you are there The only thing that matters Is being here with you In this beautiful city of lights There's so much that we could do But for now I'm just so happy Walking along the street with you I could be with you all night Until the sun begins to shine through Suetang |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ You just walked me through the streets of Paris nicely. Thanks for the trip ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a charming read! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Now this is a virtual postcard--pure dreamy romance Sue! Thank you so much, you've been so kind to me---must e ya in a bit--got a little bit of hopeful news! |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
go check out today's - I believe there's a meeting a 8:00. It sounds very encouraging. lp |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I want to go to Paris again...lovely writing...James |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for the lovely comments. I am very fortunate to have travelled to Paris twice now and it truly is such a romantic city, an experience you will never forget. I hope I captured the feel of the place for you to enjoy..........Sue Suetang |
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