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Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-04-13 03:01 PM

I see one thing
here in my mind
hold it content
as it's one of a kind

that is

my hand

nestled in yours
keeping me
safe
keeping me sure

your hand cups,
then entwines,
the feel of mine,
fingers touch,
shivering spines ~

softly you stroke
the palm of my
hand
leaving senses
reel, my knees
stop to stand

and weakly
I crumble
into your embrace
you place soft
kisses
over my face
leading us to
places
we've never been

just think

now, please...

hold my hand

again

write with grace, all others lose face;
"Jo was very tall, thin, ... and reminded one of a colt..." LMA

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

1 posted 2001-04-13 03:08 PM

Lovely piece,
Bernie
A smile a day keeps the world in

's.

Bernie Slicker

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2001-04-13 03:18 PM

Lovely piece. The soft touch of tender romance

Very well written!

Wilfred Yeats
Member Elite

since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

3 posted 2001-04-13 04:19 PM

As one who is auditory, visual, tactile...
One who glories in all his senses when presented with love - I must believe - the object of your affection - clearly revels, in the wonder of your poem - and will offer his sentiments in return - I certainly did/would!

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

4 posted 2001-04-13 04:34 PM

With all that came about from holding your hand I can't believe he would refuse to

"hold my hand

again"

Thats one powerful hand!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-04-13 05:49 PM

I believe it was the Beatles who said it so well, "I want to hold your hand."

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Kay
Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 70

6 posted 2001-04-13 06:10 PM

Yes, holding hands is a lost art...and still very much in style!

Kay
Let no one who loves be called unhappy. Even love unreturned has its rainbow." ~James M. Barrie~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-04-13 08:42 PM

I would say Lady, that only the truest of Knights would be worthy to hold the hand of such a poet. . .

excellent. . .

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