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Kay Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 70 |
Who was I before yesterday? The woman smiling beneath a shrine and oh, how I worshipped it. Draw a line from my eyes to this vision of you…… truth and life. And what is truth and life? Romance intermingled in the soft glow of sunset? No, I prefer to blow the volcano out of the ground with some old-fashioned chemistry! What’s the difference you say? Chemistry makes you forget your name! Romance puts it on a card with flowers. Walk with me, come on, take my hand and we’ll coast along the shoreline, just before sunset, we’ll spread a blanket and make love until the end of moon’s wane and then…..we’ll do it again. For my name was left in yesterday and today I am someone else….. What is my name tomorrow? Oh, my lover, it depends on if you are washed out with the tide of if you, my poet sweet, are still holding me in soft, moist sand as we begin another memory. Or perhaps, chemistry, which ignites the latter. Kay "when the going gets tough, the tough get going." [This message has been edited by Kay (edited 04-13-2001).] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Welcome ot Passions Kay ... enjoyed your poem ... thanks for sharing it with us ... some very nice thoughts here  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Kay! A most insightful poem...well done! Please, enjoy yourself, and check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Hello Kay, enjoyed reading your poem! excellent! looking forward to more! *smiles* -Tier |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Kay, Welcome to the joint! Enjoyed reading your first poem! Very fitting for PIP. Will look forward to more from the new you. Krawdad /:-}== |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Kay....from the above posts it appears that you are new. Welcome. Enjoyed your poem very much. It has a familiar, soothing rhythm. Bob |
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Kay Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 70 |
Rex: thank you for reading my poem! Sunshine: you are kind, thank you Tiersdin-yes, I have many poems no one has read, thank you for reqding Krawdad: so nice of you to reply, thank you RMW: I've been around for ages! Thank you for reading Kay |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
I loved your "Chemistry " I too am a Chemist |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is excellent. . . I really like it. . . welcome Kay. . . hope to see more of your writing. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Nicolette Fox Junior Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 10Michigan |
WoW! That was *yummy*.  ) I love all of the passionate visions of nature that express so well feelings of passion and romance. I can't wait to read more of you! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Kay! This was a wonderfully romantic poem, a beautiful first post, nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I enjoyed this very much. Welcome to the family!!  |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Kay, welcome to Passions. A great first post. I look forward to reading more of your work. Michael Proust- |
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Kay Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 70 |
Helen: I'm not really a chemist, thank you!Sven: I'm glad you read and replied, thank you very much. Nicolette: I used my imagination, I'm not really an outdoors person, thank you for reading! Kit: Yes, it is a family isn't it? thank you Poet Devine: I appreciate the welcome, thank you. Auguste: I love posting and reading and replying, thank you for yours and your most recent beautiful post. Kay |
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