Open Poetry #13 |
The Cyrenian |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I didn't even know who he was. . . I had just come from Cyrene, my home a wonderful land where the sun shone always and the nights on the plain were cool and clear from there. . . to this place this. . . Jerusalem. . . a city in turmoil these people, full of trouble and storm and now, the Romans oppressing them. . . adding to the fire and this. . . this. . . crucifixion. . . a means of death so terrible that not even the most hated of enemies back in Cyrene would even think of inflicting it on one another but today, the streets are filled to bursting the people are everywhere on the streets, in the windows wherever they could get a good view I have asked them, "What is happening?" They tell me, "He's going to be crucified today! The Galilean!! Jesus!!" I know not the name, but they tell me that he is to be crucified for crimes against Rome that he has preached rebellion, insurrection and has even compared himself to Caesar calling himself "The King of the Jews" but yet others tell me that he had not done those things that he had healed many that he preached a message of peace that he preached a message of love the love of a Father for his people "He comes!! He comes!!" I hear the crowd begin to murmur, and, I move to the front of the crowd for a better look what I see both saddens and horrifies me here is a man, this "King of the Jews" a crown of thorns upon his head, the blood streaming down his face like tears a sash of purple mockingly draped across his body and behind him, he carried his cross. . . dragging it along the ground many in the crowd revile and degrade him they hurl insults and call him names they spat in his face and slapped him the soldiers had a hard time keeping the people away but many also weep for him they cry out to him "Save yourself!!" but, he turned to them and asked them to not weep for him but for themselves. . . he stumbles. . . the crowd gasps, and a woman rushes forward to wipe the blood from his face he smiles and thanks her before the soldiers drag her away "get up!!" they shout as the whip comes down. . . he gets up. . . he stumbles. . . "Get up!!" they shout again and another lash of the whip. . . he f a l l s he cannot go on. . . he is tired, he is weak, he will probably die here. . . "You there!" one of the soldiers yells at me, "Your name?" "Simon. . . of Cyrene" "Pick up this man's cross. . . you will carry it for him. . . " and with that, they dragged me out onto the street and laid the cross on my shoulders such a heavy cross! I was amazed that he could even carry it how he made it that far I would never know we walked for a while before they had no more need of me "You may go now" they said and with that, they put the cross back on his shoulders and continued to that place outside the city Golgotha, they called it "The Place of the Skull". . . and there, he would die to pay for his supposed crimes I didn't even know who he was, but, when he looked at me, I knew that I would see Him again Art: Simon of Cyrene helps Jesus carry His Cross Artist: Unknown ------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 04-13-2001).] |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Beautiful post for Good Friday and Easter. Bernie a smile a day keeps the world in 's. Bernie Slicker |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Thank you Sven, it's people like you who write with such beauty from the heart that help carry the cross. "I didn't even know who he was, but, when he looked at me, I knew that I would see Him again" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Sven. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
AD dear heart, truly wonderful work, I'm sitting here with the tears falling this is so utterly beautiful. So truly crafted, it is as much a gift as HIS, thank you for this it's written within me Take care love as always Bubbles Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Sven...thank you very much for this. Bob |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
What can I say, as it touched my heart deeply. I haven't words enough to tell how beautiful these poem is. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for sharing. (((warm hugs))) Charisma |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Bernie, thank you. . . inot2B, I'm not alone. . . people like you help as well. . . thank you my friend. . . Sunshine, you are welcome. . . Marsha, thank you so much. . . I'm so glad that you liked this. . . Bob, you also are most welcome. . . Charisma, thank you my friend for reading. . . your words mean a lot. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful, Sven Pen! Reminds me of the song "Watch The Lamb" Awesome! still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Thank you Sven, for your writings, you are blessed. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Some things need to be read over and over. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is very impressive, nothing is worse than taking a beating and Our Lord did for us. Thank you and Happy Easter! Kathleen Blake |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sven - this is most beautiful for a very special day. Thanks for sharing this most touching writing. BC |
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