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Loomed in Reflection
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Loomed in Reflection |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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Loomed in Reflection ~~~ I'll be watching the road to eternity perhaps I'm just basting cries to the hopes of attracting a moonbeam a reflection within your eyes A twisted path from dawning time that leads through push and shove A breeze that moans through bows aloft and swirls the dust of love ~ My footstep stubbed a root so gnarled I tumbled astray the path Though I returned to sacred ground my fate so befalls your wrath ~ I stand alone amongst the weeds where a Fragrant Rose once bloomed I cannot see nor feel the warmth within your heart entombed ~ And still the years creep past forever dark shadows now veil the skies Your rose defies a memory's tether No reflection within your eyes ~~~ [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 04-14-2001).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such a hauntingly beautiful read Rex, what a lovely flow this poem has ... very nicely written indeed, much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is so quietly sad....beautiful, but sad.... |
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Kay Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 70 |
an insightful journey, stay away from those roses, they have thorns that make you bleed! Kay |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Very kind of you Kit ... glad you liked Thanks Karilea ... I just wrote it out of the blue ... nothing depicts my past here Thanks Kay ... and welcome again to Passions |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Rex I agree with Kit...indeed hauntingly beautiful...nice write my friend, loved it ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thankyou Tracie ... I'll always love getting one of your hugs |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Rex Allen--This poem is very well written...I very much enjoyed reading it. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Rex, I must agree with the others, it is a lovely poem. A somewhat fragile tale of yearning and reluctant resolve. You're good at this poetry stuff, you know? Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Martie ... thankyou very much for your kind response ... it means a lot Claire ... now how do I reply to that ... You've got me all flustered thankyou  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Rexie I'm bumping this ~HUGS~  Love is the life of the soul... |
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