Open Poetry #13 |
Beauty Sleeping |
bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
For my wife Helen, (1slick_lady) . . . Beauty Sleeping As I watch you sleeping there in the bed, So beautiful you look, that picture in my head. Peaceful and quiet, the look on your face, Always have such poise and have such grace. Wondering about your thoughts and dreams, Your emitting the rays of sunshine beams. Wanting to touch you, in this place that you seem to be, Dare not wake you, cause you’re so beautiful to me. . Bernie Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 04-13-2001).] |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
sorry ..wandered into your bedroom Bernie ..I will tiptoe out ssshhhhh |
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Panne447 Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 196S.A. TX |
me too...ssshhhhh...tip toeing - took my shoes off...but I bet she likes this a bunch. Panne |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
there sleeping in your bed is a woman hair of red now with this poem that you write has filled me with such delight you thinking i'm a beauty as i dream must be the reason that i beam "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Ah helen, thank you for reading, i to was being very quiet while writing this, and watching her sleep this morning. Panne, thank you for reading also, careful when you take off you shoes, no carpet all tiles.... guess once you have read her reply, it says it all. For my wife, I am so glad you liked this, and it is your bed too, by the way. I am so happy you liked it. As i spent about 45 minutes watching you sleep and writing this morning. But then again i have watched you sleeping a lot over the last 23yrs. I Love You. Bernie A smile a day keep the world in 's. So everyone here . Bernie Slicker |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I didn't see a thing...ok, I paused once to listen. Great write! Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
I really love the whole scenario Bernie ,,,,actually I think I saw helen peeping at you while you were peeping at her and JLR was peeping at all of us |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This was just lovely...your absolute best! Your heart spoke volumes in this--and translated...pure poetry!~ |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
JLR, Ah go ahead open your eyes, but she isn't very loud when she is sleeping. Helen, Yep, she does that every once in a while, and i think she's going to say quit watching me, but she's really still sleeping.. but i bet jlr's eyes were wide awake..lol serenity, thank you, thank you, thank you. i am try'g. opps still can not get this speelllling thing down just yet...lol must be time to do shots...... Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in 's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 04-14-2001).] |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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