Open Poetry #13 |
the parchment of my heart. . . |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the day is done and again, I seek solace in the words of my heart words that I write only for you but alas my heart find none there for want of needing you so although you are close my love it seems as if you are a thousand miles away looking at a moon that is meant for two as it casts its light upon your lonely heart and so my love my pen again finds the parchment of my heart as I begin to write the words that I pray will bring you closer to me if only for a moment and in that moment my love our hearts shall be joined as one our love will be made new and our lives my love our lives will never be the same ----------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Well, you know I can relate to this! Loved a lot! Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and so my love my pen again finds the parchment of my heart as I begin to write lovely wortds, Sven..just lovely ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Beautiful sven.. --------- the parchment of my heart --------- I just love that! |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful,Sven..simply..exquisitely.. heartfelt. still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love it! [This message has been edited by walker (edited 04-12-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Parchment of heart.... sometimes my heart, skin, soul, thoughts, sentiments, feel just like that.... Sven....this is lovely! |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Isn't it strange that when darkness comes we become lonely. Are does that just mean we're scared of the dark and don't want to be alone. Oh well, it doesn't matter, what matters is that in you it brings out an extrodinary POET. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sven, This is wonderfully and tenderly romantic. Thanks for sharing such a nice piece. Michael Proust- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
So tender in longing and desire...James |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
and now it is on the parchment of my heart .......lovely words |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Very beautiful writing, Sven, enjoyed reading... *smiles* -Tier |
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Kay Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 70 |
I liked the message, but it's been a long time, since anyone said "alas" to me. I thought it was a classic poem as that and other phrasing was so strict. Pardon me, if I'm wrong! Kay |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
JLR, I know that you can. . . thank you. . . Wynter, thank you my friend. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . Tennessee Angel, thank you for reading my friend. . . Temptress, thank you. . . walker, thank you as well!! Sunshine, I would say that we're all that. . . just waiting to be written on. . . thank you. . . inot2B, those are good questions. . . I would say that it's a combination of both. . . perhaps. . . thank you as always my friend. . . Michael, thank you for reading my friend. . . I am glad that you enjoyed. . . James, I know you know how this is. . . thank you. . . helen, thank you. . . I am honored. . . Tier, thank you so much. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . Kay, you're not wrong. . . I like to write in that "Classic" style sometimes. . . it's me. . . thank you . . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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