Summer Days................... Rictameter

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Open Poetry #13

Summer Days................... Rictameter

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-04-12 02:16 PM

Liquid,
Lapping brooks, streams,
Burbling, gurgling, splashing
Bringing wet cool to sunny days
I will splash you if you will splash me more
Then we might lie upon the shore
Smiling, beguiling ways,
Drowning in our
Liquid

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 04-12-2001).]

Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

1 posted 2001-04-12 02:21 PM

Perfect, Sunshine!!! Nice read. I gotta go get a towel now to dry up all this liquid!

Mike

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-04-12 02:22 PM

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

What a way to go

Amazing!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

3 posted 2001-04-12 02:34 PM

this makes me soooo ready for the warm weather.....this is great Sunshine!

SEA (love the photo too)

PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

4 posted 2001-04-12 02:49 PM

gurgle, gurgle.....help, i'm drowning... LOL

You bring out very vivid descriptions with these. I wish i could be so descriptive.

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

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Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2001-04-12 02:51 PM

Wonderful Karilea! I see that you can do any style of poetry well

Take care,
Melissa~

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

6 posted 2001-04-12 02:53 PM

Very nice write, took me to the north when waiting for spring time thaw, and spring time woooooing....Opps did i say that. I am sure glad i live in the south now though.
Bernie
A smile a day keeps the world in

's.

Bernie Slicker

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-04-12 04:42 PM

Karilea~
Oh, this is sooooo refreshingly lovely.

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

8 posted 2001-04-12 04:42 PM

You are soooo baaad ~S~ -
rictameter eh? - 2-4-6-8-10 and back ?
Ok I'll give it a try - but you set a tough content goal ~S~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2001-04-12 05:02 PM

Looks and sounds enticing...James

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

10 posted 2001-04-12 05:21 PM

enjoy

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

11 posted 2001-04-12 08:36 PM

Sunshine ... I'd splash you whether you splashed me,
or not

loved it

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