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Through These Eyes |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Through These Eyes ~*Marge Tindal*~  All the world before me lies full of promise lit with surprise To be written through these eyes on yet barren canvas of the heart God has said, Let there be light to burn throughout eternity Let there be eternal glow Lord let it begin ~ in me ~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I have it on good authority that this is a true reflection of GOD...  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ Thank you for sharing Cassandra's remark with me. Precious thoughts from the precious mind of a child. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Lord let it begin with me. Now that is a statement.. Very lovely Marge Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in  's.Bernie Slicker |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bernie~ Thank you for enjoying this little message. The eyes of a child have so much to envision - they will light the world. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ oh yes, I like this very much...make me all emotional.... SEA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok, that's it. I'm putting my pen down, and bowing to those that know how to write.... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh sure go for my Achillis heel - I am a sucker for a baby and your words any day, and Sunshine that cup you are holding with your pencil...here's mine, kerplunk! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Amen, lovely. *L* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--This is a perfect thought to start the day...thank you for it...and you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ I smile knowingly at your softness of heart.  Karilea & Mysteria~ Okay, you two 'kerplunkers' ... One heck of a compliment, but truth is those baby eyes wrote this one across my heart. Thank you both soooooo much. Seymour~ Bless your heart. Martie~ You are welcome for both, my friend. Thank you so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is precious, Marge...awesome. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
this one goes in my library it's a perfect poem... absolutely perfect! (and round) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thank you ... doesn't surprise me at all that it would touch you. Doreen~ I thank you very much for this reply. In the eyes of a child much is yet to shine - This one just felt good ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
sweet little poem sweet little soul awesome responsibility to fix the canvas just right |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Helen~ Thank you very much for letting me know you like this little piece. Yes ... they are such pristine canvas with all the future to be painted. May they keep the innocence in their hearts and may we learn to see Through These Eyes. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Through These Eyes ~*Marge Tindal*~ All the world before me lies full of promise lit with surprise To be written through these eyes on yet barren canvas of the heart God has said, Let there be light to burn throughout eternity Let there be eternal glow Lord let it begin ~ in me ~ *I had a request to do one in blue for printing out for the birth of a boy ... I am pleased to do that. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, this is utterly fabulous love, it really is. A reflection of Him in the eyes of a child. Always you write beauty I thank you for this and for him love. Fabulous work, take care love and warm stuff Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Margie~ Simply devine my friend ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ You are always there for me, gal ! *HugsHugsHugsHugsHugs* I am so glad you liked this little piece.  Tracie~ Thanks for your sweet reply, my friend. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Marge~ Being a second time mom, and so blessed, they are a Magnificent grace from God....thank you so much for writing this....it's a true treasure.... Lauren~ "Within you I lose myself |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh Marge, this is just so precious, I adore children and have always believed this to be true! Thank you for sharing this! I have a few friends that I will print this out for "A child is God's opinion that the world must go on" Carl Sandburg |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ *Hugs* to you. Yes, we are blessed with the responsibility of motherhood. Melissa~ Thanks for enjoying it so. I bought miniature frames and it does make the perfect 'Awwww ! gift' for the parents or grandparents of newborns. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is very touching. THanks for sharing it with us.. I enjoyed it very much. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
FadingAway~ Ahhhhh ... I just love that 'sharing' word. That's what it's all about. Thank you for the reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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