Open Poetry #13 |
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Life Still Captivating Some How |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California ![]() |
Life Still Captivating Some How The day is yet young How far I have come No matter what lay ahead I shall steady my tread From minuteness to now Life still captivating Some how It’s just a matter of perception Desire of Soul-searching perfection For what keeps one grounded Has little merit Or founded For all we are comes From within It does not matter Through thick or thin Our dreams we make and Some come true But how we get there We have no clue! Till we put our heart Soul and mind To the task at hand Even if hard the grind If for a moment in time True happiness we find Then all that became labor Will be heart desired Neighbor For in remembrance of heart We shall walk the line Teeter or totter we do not part For upon meditation We were blessed with Contentment and our salvation By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ BIG hugs to you this morning ! 'For all we are comes From within' Is that ever the AMEN of it ! ! ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Enjoyed your rhyme!!!!!! Kathleen Blake |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Till we put our heart Soul and mind To the task at hand Even if hard the grind" Wonderful Cerenity! Oh, how I love a poem laced with wisdom and truth, very well done! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
words well spoken my friend. . . just wonderful. . . ![]() --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Good Morning Marge, Irish Rose, Kit, Sven, Thank you so much for your kind replys to my work and for stopping by, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi, I enjoyed this a lot. Very good thoughts, feels very positive, and sometimes I REALLY need that. ![]() Sandra |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Hi,, this is very good-- love the sentiments it expresses so well.. Jamie |
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