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Eternity's Wind
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Eternity's Wind |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song 
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Eternity's Wind Grains disbursed into memory's mold Archiving briefly our new love's trail Each imprint another chapter to be told As they are read between kisses set asail Waves of jade marbled in curls of white Breaching the silence with Neptune's song As Luna showers in the stars of this night She salts the air between embraces strong Gentle tugs pulling the tides of lust Between sparkles of our crested gaze As tender lips adorn a bridge of trust Blazing a future within scalloped maze As imprints wash away in a tidal girth Seagulls dance as our two hearts ascend Twirling on a breeze of tomorrow's birth Our love is entrusted to eternity's wind Mark Christopher JM posting this for Mark, he's traveling with his new job. He apologizes for not being here to reply to your work, but the poems are read to him. He sends his regards and hellos to all. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ seeing your name made me smile....so I came inside to read.....and sigh....I miss ya cowboy......  SEA |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Mark, no matter how far away you are or by what means you post these lovely poems, they are wonderful. Thank you for going through all the trouble so we can enjoy your words. Hugs, ME |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Mark--I am so glad to see a poem from you again...and it is so beautifully you...hugs to you, my friend. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I loved it! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Waves of jade marbled in curls of white Breaching the silence with Neptune's song As Luna showers in the stars of this night She salts the air between embraces strong' Hey there, Teach! So, you made the right decision to save your words for the force of good, instead of evil! LOL  But, really, I stand in awe of the imagery here...just when I thought I was getting close with it, you go and write something as beautifully breathtaking as this! sheesh...  ...but, wonderful write, as always, and I hope to see ya around again soon! You know we all miss ya!  sp  to be with you... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
wonderful poem, Mark |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Mark you are a marvelous poet and this one shines as always ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hello, Sweets~ Durn it ... I miss ya' !  'Blazing a future within scalloped maze' As always, you are right on with your sweet sentiment ... Lovely thoughts ... from a great heart. Love~ *Hugs* and all that jazz. Be good~ Be safe~ Be BACK !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
It looks like we're both back. Wonderful to read this from you. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
This is so pretty. I love the imagery. I think this is my favorite... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Waves of jade marbled in curls of white Breaching the silence with Neptune's song As Luna showers in the stars of this night She salts the air between embraces strong ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ So much is said in each and every line. Beautiful as always! Take Care, Deb |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Mark~ What a treat it is to read a poem by you This was so beautifully romantic, and you must know by now that I just ADORE soulmate/love poetry. Your phrasing in this is divine and very touching. Come back to us real soon!~ Take care, Melissa~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 04-12-2001).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
"As tender lips adorn a bridge of trust" It was nearly impossible to choose a favorite phrase from such a well-constructed cohesive whole... but this line just kept calling me back with its beauty... and what great promise the last verse contains! *S* No one else writes of love with such perfection... and no one equals your descriptive powers. These blue pages just aren't as addictive when your name is missing, Mark. Many thanks to JM for posting this for you... and many hopes that you can return soon. Your poetry and replies are so much missed! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful Mark, just beautiful as always. I am glad that I was able to read this one. And I hope to read more from your hand, as you know that I admire your work. Thank you JM for your help to let me know about this gorgeous piece. Happy Easter and may you have wonderful days with many blessings. Charisma |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
here I was just zooming down the line of names, and I stopped, and said wait...could I be dreaming...was that Mark B's name i saw? I backed up and sure enough....and what a read...have missed your writing and your presence on the boards...come back soon |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Mark, such a pleasure to see you here...even if it's through Janet. This is, as usual, a beautiful poem. Take care and come back soon, Dee Janet, thanks for the email. I don't get here as much as I'd like and I would've missed this otherwise. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is so eternally Mark....thank you Janet. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So nice that Janet is here to give us our Mark "fix". This is another beauty, and left a very sweet and peaceful feeling in my heart. Miss you, Mark. Sandra |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"As tender lips adorn a bridge of trust" "Seagulls dance as our two hearts ascend Twirling on a breeze of tomorrow's birth" Ahhhh Mark ... so good to read you again! I hope all is going well, we've missed you! You've clearly continued to write beautiful poetry in your absence from us ... this is just lovely. Wonderfully descriptive, with so many incredibly visual lines. Beautifully written! Best wishes and hope to see more from you soon, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Archiving briefly our new love's trail Each imprint another chapter to be told Waves of jade marbled in curls of white Breaching the silence with Neptune's song As Luna showers in the stars of this night She salts the air between embraces strong (what an amazing verse that is MC) ============================ Between sparkles of our crested gaze Blazing a future within scalloped maze ============================ Seagulls dance as our two hearts ascend Our love is entrusted to eternity's wind ============================= Ok typist and secretary gets her turn to swoon Mark you know how I am so impressed and blown away by your gift for painting these exquisite scenes and romantic emotions and this one is a perfect showcase of those talents that you write with so effortlessly. always unique and never cliched' phrases and images. This is a ten toots.. dont doubt me one of my favs of yours too-- which makes it a groovy baby LOL  |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
This was so very emotionally touching, Mark. Your talents flow so beautifully from your heart. I saved this poem..it is a keeper!Aloha, friend. You are missed here. I look for what ever new is posted. Your fan,(another one) Koko  Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Near or far...you still know how to stroke a womans heart with your poetry Mark...ahhhhh if life could be as simple as poetry and rosepetals...and orange blossoms ...Your talent to weave the images so that the reader can touch them, smell them, taste them...that's talent baby...and you got an armload of it...and you share it beautifully my dear friend~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
so glad to see your poem here, but sure wish it could be you, too hope the job is going well and you'll get time to 'really' be here, soon |
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Kay Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 70 |
well very nice images here! Kay |
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shadow of poetry Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 76midwest usa |
howdy cowboy, whats up? im at jans and wanted to stop in and see your latest work of art. j said it is one of your best and i have to agree, its up there, tho i am partial to that dream catcher one (haha)but this really is a beaut, made me feel like i was walking that beach, and im keeping this one too. great getting to read you again mark lil sis |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I know how much you love this artist and I found these pics that went perfectly with your poem... Im leaving them here as a surprise for when ya get back on line and can see them. love ya me    http://www.jimwarren.com In another life...I know I loved you then |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
On Marks behalf... he asks me to tell ALL of you THANK YOU so very much for your support, encouragement and understanding, while he is off line.... He is very grateful to those you you who continue to reply so loyaly and kindly to his work, and he will return that loyalty as soon as he can get back in here. Thank you all for these wonderful replies. I have found in you ... a reflection of me ... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
As I said earlier... no one writes love poems better. *S* But since I no longer harbor hopes that I'll ever inspire such a critter, I sometimes turn a little green with envy reading love poems, even when reading the best. *G* So... if you thought this was enough of a fix to last your addicts a while, think again! LOL You are greatly missed, cowboy... this place just isn't the same without your replies and ALL your great poetry. *S* That missing inspired the poem I just posted... I hope Janet Marie will be kind enough to read it to you. *S* Hurry back! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
beautiful Mark, Hurry back... Lauren~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Mark, may the winds carry you back to us swiftly, and although I know you are not here in the present, your spirit is with us. As always, I loved this. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Ruth, Lauren, and Gentle Spirit... Mark askes me to thank you all for your wondeful replies and for your support while he is off line... he appreciates the kindess greatly... and Ruthie.. if you keep comming back here... your gonna go blind  LOL |
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