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Open Poetry #13

Losing my soul

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2001-04-11 05:24 PM

On the brink of sanity
playing Russian roulette
with lovely Seraphs
in some dark corner
of my mind

Peering out from my darkness
for answers
I can never find

Dreaming of heaven
in monocrome
as I fall from grace
inside my bleeding soul

Standing on the corner
of yesturday and tommorow
asking for dreams
from the drunk passed out in the gutter
in hopes that someday
I might find my way home

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-04-11 06:49 PM

Very Dark...wow...I hope all is ok....hugs

SEA ( I liked it even being so dark

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Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2001-04-11 06:52 PM

Thanks

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2001-04-11 07:48 PM

I like this..Here's to finding your way home, eh?

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

4 posted 2001-04-11 08:46 PM

We've all been in the dark, and live in fear of it's return.

Cor

wandering glider
Senior Member

since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

5 posted 2001-04-12 12:15 PM

Maybe "the brink of sanity" IS home.
Remember, the questions are more important than the answers.
wg

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doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

6 posted 2001-04-12 12:31 PM

quote:
asking for dreams
from the drunk passed out in the gutter

geez........ that says it , doesn't it?

powerful piece my friend....

and now?

all we need is some

POWERFUL PEACE

i loved it......

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