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mini poet Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 56Canada 
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Rain  Rain is falling everywhere on rain-hats coats and sleeves It's raining down on everything and dripping off the leaves ~ The rain is pouring down so hard that everyone stays inside Yet I stay splashing at the park and dripping down the slide ~~~ Jennifer April 2001 |
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dreamy_eyes Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 67 |
I read your poem several times, and couldn't come to the conclusion whether your poem was displaying your sadness within,or if u were just talking about rain. A great poem a pleasure to read, keep writing Luv Debi xxx  |
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mini poet Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 56Canada |
I just like the rain. I even like the thunder and lightning. I like the fresh smell after a rain storm.  |
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dreamy_eyes Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 67 |
Good jen I'm glad it isnt your sadness! I love the rain! My friends think I'm mad because I love taking walks in the rain. God knows why I like it but it's calm and soothing! Luv Debi xXx |
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dreamy_eyes Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 67 |
Oh and anytime you wanna chat email me! If you want to that is [email protected]  Luv Debi xXx |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Jennifer~ me too....I love the rain....we have some today, not as much as I'd like though....rain makes me feel so happy and excited inside..... I really liked this and I'm putting it in my library....you look to be about the same age as my girls ( they are 10 and 11) SEA |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Jennifer...."....dripping down the slide..." Been there and done that....though not for a week or two. Excellent! Bob (a Duck) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
wished the rain would come down over her It's sunny day all day enjoyed |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MiniPoet~ What a delightful romp in the rain. You make it look and sound so FUN ! Gosh, you're a cutie too !  Keep writing, young lady ... we'll keep enjoying it. ADORABLE graphic ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like this very much. We've had some rain lately, which is unusual for the desert. I'm going to put this in my library and hope that in the future, if we do an all kids issue of the newsletter, that you will allow us to use it (we'll talk to one of your parents about it). Thanks! |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Thanks for reminding me of playing in the rain. We used to build dams in the gutters and flood the whole street!! Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter |
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