Open Poetry #13 |
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Quiet Whispers |
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Brad Majors![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia ![]() |
Quiet whispers fill the night air telling of new love which blossomed in the spring now binds two lovers as they share a kiss on a old bridge under starlit sky. As they kiss the night comes alive with the chorus of crickets and songbirds. Even the stars seem brighter which are dim in comparison to the sparkle in these lover's eyes. As the sun threatens to end this special moment he take out a ring and slips it on her finger. Nothing is said she nods her head he smiles they kiss and hold each other as the sun rises. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sunsets, sunrises, whispers....you managed to encompass all that I like... and formed a circle... well done Brad! Karilea |
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Brad Majors![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you! |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Mush stuff ;-) Well done my friend. Just keep on keepin' on so we may enjoy you all the more. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy ![]() |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Preciously romantic! |
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Brad Majors![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Thank you for your kindness! ![]() |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Absolutely beautiful, Brad! I definitely have to keep this one! I love it! sp ![]() to be with you... |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Oh Brad this is wonderful..I am a die hard romantic and this is great. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Hopelessly romantic . . . I love it!! ![]() All writing comes |
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Beckalini Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 151Yorkshire, England |
You have a talent for telling a story and painting a picture don'tcha? I like it! A lot! Well done Brad...thanks for sharing ![]() ~Becky~ |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very romantic poem. Joyce |
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Brad Majors![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Thank you ![]() |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Brad, Romantic, lovely imagery. Excellent write. I much enjoyed this. Thanks Michael Proust- |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You captured a moment in time that can not be duplicated. Wonderful job on this. I loved it. ~*~ I write, therefore I am ~*~ |
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