Open Poetry #13 |
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Wind Dancer |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores ![]() |
Wind Dancer ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~*~ Swirling and twirling catching a gentle breeze Softest feathered movement through the weeping willow trees Fluttering wings of the cooing dove glide in gentle slide upon a face in love Dance across a mountain-dip into the sea blow your gentle breezes swiftly home to me When the wind so fairly dances across the land all things are caressed by God's own gentle hand ~And they call the wind ~Mysteria Thank you for this inspiration~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh my! You got out your crayons again didn't you? My, the colors are all inside the lines too! Simply lovely, and I am not sure how I inspired this, but I shall keep it up if this is what happens! Beautiful! |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Marge, A very sweet poem. May I have this dance? ![]() Michael Proust- |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh Oh Oh! I love it when one poet inspires another so colorfully! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
So lovely and wonderful Marge! ![]() Take care, Melissa~ |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Needless to say this wind blew right through my heart. Wonderfully inspired writing. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, this is utterly beautiful, truly I'm speachless I love it and it's soooooooo you fabulous dear heart love and warm stuff Mushy ![]() Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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LoveBug![]()
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Marge, your words are so beatuiful and powerful. I enjoy everything you write, and this is no exception. Thanks for sharing. ![]() "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
a beautiful dance across the wind, so lovely Marge, your words... ![]() Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Might have been those 'long-winded' e-mails ! LOL ! ![]() Silly girl ... 'Tempest' did it for me ! SO THERE ! ![]() Michael~ Indeed you may ! ![]() Karilea~ Oh, me too ! ![]() Melissa~ Thanks, hon. ![]() Julian~ Thank you for letting me know. ![]() Marsha~ LOL ! YOU ??? SPEECHLESS ??? LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL! *hugs* n' *giggles* ![]() LoveBug~ Awww ! Thank you, honey. ![]() GreenEyes~ Thank you for letting me know it danced for you. ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ this is beautiful....feels so soft ![]() |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Marge, again you have painted a wonderful picture with your vivid words. Oh so lovely. Hugs ME |
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mini poet Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 56Canada |
I like your poem Marge. It's really nice. Sometimes I wonder about the wind and where it came from, and who might have taken the last breath of the same air that I breath. :^) Jenn |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ It blew softly across my mind~ I'm glad you could feel that. Thank you. MotherEarth~ Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it. MiniPoet~ Thank you, Jenn. Good ponders on your part ... Maybe you'd care to write a little something on the wind ?? ![]() ~*Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl this is just too wonderful to let slip down the page. (Is this a resurection of Bev de Bump, no it's just me, doing Bev de Bumps work) Well, you know after she died so tragically young, I have to do something to recall her to memory. Truly utterly outstanding, I did tell you that this is tres bon, didn't I? Of course Take care love and warm stuff Mushy ![]() Feeling a little puckish ![]() You knew I'd love this didn't you of course you did xxxx Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ You are such a love ... give Bev de Bump a special *hug* from me ! ![]() You ARE 'puck' ... Tee-Hee ! Love ya', gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The title enchanted me... and the poem delighted. *S* |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Suthern~ Don't ya' just love that enchantment ? You're a sweetie and I thank you for the read. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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