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Open Poetry #13

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Embers_Before_God
Member

since 2001-03-06

Posts 101
USA

0 posted 2001-04-10 02:01 AM

With my soul, I write.
Some cannot see poetry—
their hearts lack the strength.

Dance with me under the moon. Touch my pale skin. Devour me. Love me.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2001-04-10 03:44 AM

A lot of wisdom within those three lines, and I think I shall listen to their message. Great write.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2001-04-10 10:00 AM

embers,
I see you followed the KISS principle, Kept It Short and Simple, but added beauty.
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-04-10 10:03 AM

The only way...thank you for this!

Bec
Member

since 2001-02-23

Posts 475
Canberra

4 posted 2001-04-10 10:19 AM

So true. How could we not be strong enough to see poetry with such wonderful people here?

The past is a foreign country - they do things differently there ~ Unknown

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

5 posted 2001-04-10 01:15 PM

I like this! Very short but very well written!

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

6 posted 2001-04-10 01:49 PM

Who says what is poetry boils down to two people: the writer and the reader. Other than that, the rest is just dialogue. Good job.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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