Under The Spell of The Moon

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Open Poetry #13

Under The Spell of The Moon

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-04-09 10:21 PM

On top of the sand dune
We look down below
Out across the sea
We shine by the moons glow

Our toes disappear
Into the warm, coarse sand
As we're drawn to each other
Under the spell of the moon

As we lie there together
Being seduced by the moon
Our hearts sing as one
The same beautiful tune
Lost in love, our souls dance
To a beautiful song
So much love to be made
Before too long

The feelings we have welling deep from within
Are so natural, so surreal
I think we've found paradise
So let love begin

Suetang

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

1 posted 2001-04-09 10:28 PM

Sue,

You a definitely a romantic, my friend. I love the sweetness in this one. Thank you.

Hey, the moon is always a good touch too.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-04-09 10:53 PM

SueTang~
That moon is sure glowing !
Wonderfully done.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

3 posted 2001-04-09 11:22 PM

Michael
Once again thank you for your kind words and your never ending encouragement......Sue

Marge
Thank you for enjoying my words......Sue

Suetang

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

4 posted 2001-04-10 10:23 AM

Sue, you have created a very romantic picture here. Makes me want to go there with my someone special.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2001-04-10 03:04 PM

Ah you ventured away from the garden and it suits you my friend, just a lovely, romantic poem.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

6 posted 2001-04-10 05:56 PM

Dee

I'm glad you enjoyed the picture I painted with my words.......thank you, Sue

Mysteria

Yes, it was so very difficult to pry myself away from my garden into another place and I'm glad you liked the journey....thank you, Sue

Suetang

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