Open Poetry #13 |
Sunday Morning |
Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Sunday Morning The new-born sun pushes away the darkness. You stretch I yawn and we both struggle from under the covers. I take refuge on the couch while you retreat to the kitchen. I can hear God's "Concerto for Birds" being performed outside. Later, (upon His cue) it is joined by running tap water, a percolator, and a few exquisitely hummed notes from you. Before I know it, you are again next to me with coffee and the Times. We begin to share the paper and halfway through "Peanuts" I stop to watch you sip. Memories of last night's sighs revisit my mind but alas, their echos fade with each passing second. I anticipate the finale of today's concerto. I long for the return of darkness. Do you? "HEY, DON'T THROW THAT AWAY, I MIGHT NEED IT SOMEDAY!!!" Packratmike |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Oh I applaud!!!!!!! This is just beautiful! Excellent flow and imagery. A keeper! "Often the test of courage is not to die but to live" |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
WOO HOOO!! I'm up early because I haven't gone to bed, and I don't think I can sleep again until it gets dark..SOOO...yes..I wish it were nightime again too..so I can sleep agai..err..so I can sleep (since I haven't been yet) I do like the serene picture you paint here, and wish I had a copy of this portrait for myself. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, I really enjoyed this piece ... what a wonderful mood you've set, great writing Packratmike! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
In a word...YES!!!!! |
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