Open Poetry #13 |
Days Like These |
Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
On days like these I forget you're gone. The sun shines bright and nothing goes wrong. The birds all sing and I float on the breeze. Lord, I do love days like these. On days like these my soul is at peace. I smile at the fellas and I flirt and I tease. I walk by them real slow because I aim to please. I love the way they whistle on days like these. On days like these my heart hears a song and my lips can't help but to just sing along. The world is all right. I'm unhindered and free. Life doesn't get better than days like these. On days like these I love the open road. I take that old highway just as far as it goes. With the windows down, hair blowing in the breeze, I thank the good Lord for days like these. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and we thank Him for poets like you!! wonderful Angel!!! --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Oh Yes...Days like you have described are wonderful. Rare moments of peace in all the chaos that we make life. Loved this! still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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shadydaze Member
since 2000-10-02
Posts 85 |
a well written, easy flowing poem that expresses your thoughts quite nicely. good work. shadydaze cookeville, tn |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Angel - it seems that most of what I am reading this morning is the way I feel. Amazing it is, and I'm glad that I read your writing. It certainly hit home with me. BC |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I loved the flow of this!!! Kathleen Blake |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Hey, TA! Boy, don't we all love days like these...wonderful flow and expressions! I love this! sp to be with you... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
On days like these I enjoy reading your poetry very much. This was beautiful!! All writing comes |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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