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| Open Poetry #13 |
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My first and last Love |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan 
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Thanx to Helen Smith for help to write this....Thanx I lie in my lonely bed, idle hands not idle Hands that reach for her ... reach for her shadow A new world was waiting for me... The cool air, the moon, the stars........ The dreams, the happiness, the sorrows… My heart was ready My hands knew the song. Her shadow on my walls…knew the dance. She moved inside me and travel up to my heart Soon the moon and the star would shine their approval And she would join her shadow and me In our eternal Dance Soon She stole my heart and went away Making me her slave For the whole life... She locked my door and took the key But I would never leave And here I wait upon my bed She will come one day And will make me happy up to my desires Until then I am a dancer with …the shadows ~Waseem~ I love to nice poetry. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow...touching the heart here...fantastic write!!  SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I can feel this one...James |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Touching! Great job |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Dancing with shadows, we so often do, but with spring about the corner...perhaps shadows no more. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Your heart really comes through in this. I could feel your happiness and then your sorrow. Good write! Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
oh waseem it ended up lovely.........when will you make her your wife ? |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
stilll so nice |
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