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lonely echo's song
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lonely echo's song |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Not a glimmer glistened past as I peered through looking glass. No bend of light to please mind's eye, I gazed upon myself in cry. Eyes too merry in the tears, too blue to see beyond my fears. Passioned lips in pouting red, swollen from the bite of lead-- a bullet that I grip in teeth-- unclenching of my hand in reach... And the lonely echo's song mocking the eternal long, reverberating to my ear: "you'll find no answer here." [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 04-09-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah serenity....so sad....lighten up, little one.... I need a dance from you! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Not a glimmer glistened past as I peered through looking glass. No bend of light to please mind's eye, I gazed upon myself in cry. Eyes too merry in the tears, too blue to see beyond my fears. ========================== And the lonely echo's song mocking the eternal long, reverberating to my ear: "you'll find no answer here." ======================== mirror mirror on the wall.......... Looking hard into your eyes, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Look up and see the beauty of promise. Look beyond your canope, further, further ... There it is! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
try saying something else. . . excellent. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is really sad, but so well written! You said a lot of what I am feeling today. I loved this. Sauni Sauni :) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
so sorry i am so intense so sorry I was so pretense I wish a simple fingernail-- a leave of red, a lust's red snail... and all my comfort, waits undone. I wish you were my only one... Lovely laughter echo free, freedom thinks-- you might want me. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Very powerful and deep with melancholy emotion, the last few lines hit hard! I relate very much, excellent writing~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks as always for you sweet kindness...HUGS in appreciation!  |
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