Open Poetry #13 |
It's All A Lie............. |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I am strong I don't need you in my life you hurt me and I stopped loving you for that ache you created so deep in me I shut off my heart to you completely without once looking back no dreams of you no memories of you either it was so easy I can barely remember what you look like sound like feel like I don't miss you I never cry hearing that song doesn't trigger a tidal wave of emotions I have none when it comes to you ~SEA~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Strength.... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well, sweety I hope this isn't about you. A very good write. hugs anyway... Parker |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I hate liars. Once I know someone has lied to me, I never completely trust them again. I'm sure this isn't about you, you deserve the best! Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 03-22-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Did anyone ever tell you..your a beautiful liar ... (poetically speaking of course) got the full message of this one Sea-girlie... Some times all we can do it lie to our selves to heal... well done poetess of heart. hugs oh you speak to me in riddles |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
I too caught the subtleties here...at least I think I did. Nice SEA. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
how do you DO that? i don't know, but i think that if i got that angry and cut someone who i had loved out of my life because i'd gotten hurt, i'd probably end up an old jaded, angry lady for the rest of my life and never be able to open up again how do you DO That? the poem was quite strong.... very angry.... very full of hurt and i admire a person who can write about such disturbing emotions... but.... i don't know how to do that.....sometimes i have needed to and still wasn't able to.... thanks for the read and for your thought provoking work |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ I wish I had enough......... Parker~ It is, but not that way....I'll take a hug from you any day thank you Kathleen~I too, don't care for liars, but in this case, the liar, is me. I'm lying to myself Janet~ thank you so much for getting this.....yes, I've been lying to myself lately....trying not to miss an old friend. PK~ I think you did too thank you Doreen~ I react emotionally first, logically second.....always have, always will.... I didn't want this person cut from my life......it wasn't my choice and I'm still hurting, and trying to heal......but yes, I have actually cut only one person out of my life like this....my ex....and that was easy, when someone beats you, cutting them out is the only choice. I'd like to see you write angry. I bet it'd be good. ~SEA |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
I know that lie. Wonderful Write, Sea! "When people show you who they are, believe them" |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, I could feel that emotion coming through these lines SEA ... very well written! It's so hard to make our hearts take heed of the words sometimes... Best wishes (and more {{{hugs}}} ), /Kit |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Wow this is powerful, and shows that you are powerful... Great writing. Bernie a a day keeps the world 'g Bernie Slicker |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
sea- LOL ... just read your comment back to me... you haven't seen ME write ANGRY? hehe... well... ummm... i do that a lot!!!!!.... rofl..... anyway.... yeah.... i react the same way... emotionally first... it's a battle, but ain't it fun? .... just trying to stay soft before the jaded sets in again.... i've been called the "angst queen"..... you're doing well with following in my footsteps with this one.... i think i'd rather write the Love, though, even if it bounces off walls... what i MEANT was... i don't know how to write the anger... right now...*sigh*.... just thought i'd come back and tell you again how good this one was ...... and respond to your comment to me thanks for the read [This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 03-30-2001).] |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
SEA, I've done this...doesn't work, but I've done it. My best! (hugs) Michael Proust- |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've lied so often to myself Believed the lies of others Until every hope was gone And belief in me was smothered They say we do what's necessary Just so we can get through I wish you days of happiness Where you can shine in truth. Okay... so I got a bit carried away. *G* But I do relate... and you did do great! *G* Okay, okay... I'm going, I'm going... hush suthern! LOL |
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