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Open Poetry #13

Love Song

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2001-04-09 12:27 PM

Let us talk in harmony
and walk together in rythmn
as the song of our hearts
rushes forth
like a mighty chorus
filling the expanse
of God's heaven
always in perfect time
always on beat
let us make out love
one majestic melody
that the angels
now do sing

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2001-04-09 05:35 AM

Oh...this reached out to touch my musician's heart, and I could hear the melody flowing through it!  Thank you for the song!!
(P.S.  It's good to have you here at Passions!!)

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 04-09-2001).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2001-04-09 08:53 AM

(sigh) Such a lovely and beautiful song for the one you love. (sigh) She is a very lucky woman indeed to share such a purity of love as yours! I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-04-09 09:04 AM

Brad~ this is wonderful...

SEA

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-04-09 10:24 AM

Oh yes, let's!

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

5 posted 2001-04-09 12:10 PM

Thank you!

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

6 posted 2001-04-09 12:12 PM

thank you all for your kindness.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2001-04-11 04:43 PM

I like the melody of this one very much. *S*

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2001-04-12 11:24 AM

nice poem

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

9 posted 2001-04-12 11:31 AM

Very pleasant piece...I'm thinking you mean 'our' not 'out' in that line near the bottom, right?

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