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What I See |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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You said you would always care, it didn’t matter when or where... You became my shelter from reality... You moved deep into my soul, embedded, gained complete control, then opened up my eyes so I could see... What I see...is a friend... One who’ll love me to the end, and who’ll never let me walk my path alone... When I finally saw the light, like a beacon in the night, you were there...shining love...to guide me home... Many times I’ve lost my way, because there was no light of day... No one cared, or offered me their hand... Then one day I looked up to see your angel face look down at me... Within your smile, I grew to understand... What I see...in your eyes... cannot ever be disguised... And we’re helpless...love has claimed us for her own... We shall love until we die, then beyond our hearts will fly... Like a beacon, love will guide our spirits home... What I see...is so real... I never dreamed that I would feel... So in love, and safe within your love for me... In my heart...you will stay... Through forever, and today... Soul to soul, and heart to heart... Is what I see... Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunnyone, good poem, interesting rhyming scheme. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Doug Pretorius Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 81Ontario, Canada |
Oh yes! I loved this piece! I loved everything about it, the thoughts and feelings so elequently and beautifully written in unwavering style and grace. Your rhyme and rhthym, made it very easy and enjoyable to read. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SunnyOne~ What a beautifully written message. 'like a beacon in the night, you were there...shining love...' What a lovely light to catch you in it's glow.  Lovely, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Kethry... Thank you, my friend, and I'm glad you picked up on the cadence....it is the newest song that I am working on! Doug... Welcome to the family here at Passions!! And thank you for your nice reply, too. I really am glad that you liked this one!! Marge... Thank you, my good friend, and only love can shed a light that is a beacon to guide us!!  Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
 Live like it's your last day... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
...thank you bbent!...  Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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