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Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2001-04-08 04:59 PM

You and I will walk together
Through the dense forest
Between the tallest trees
Following this simple path
To see just where it leads

You and I will walk together
Beside the mighty river
Watching the water rush by
As the ducks diligently swim
Across to the other side

You and I will walk together
Through the flower garden
We'll take the time to appreciate
The radiant beauty of each blossom
Residing in this glorious place

You and I will walk together
Along the rugged shoreline
Past the children playing
To the sheltered harbor
Where the lighthouse stands proud

You and I will walk together
Down the city streets
In front of the tall buildings
Through the deserted park
To pause in front of the fountain

You and I will walk together
Across the highest mountains
Through the green valleys
To the small clearing
Where we'll have a picnic

You and I will walk together
In the warm summer rain
We'll feel totally refreshed
As the rain cleanses us
Washing away our fears

You and I will walk together
Amongst the various people
That make up this world of ours
Two lives joined as one life
Two hearts beating in perfect rhythm

You and I will walk together
Through the minutes that give way
To the hours which build the days
That form the weeks, months, and years
Of the rest of our life as man and wife

Yes, you and I will walk together . . .

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2001-04-08 05:07 PM

I love this one!! It is such a wonderful tribute to all the good things in marriage, all the walks and talks, and time spent together. Thank you for writing this for us!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

2 posted 2001-04-08 05:07 PM

A beautiful poem about a love that will endure. Enjoyed!

Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-04-08 05:09 PM

God bless your happy walks together. Joyce

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-04-08 05:18 PM

it's glorious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-04-08 07:22 PM

LW~ this is beautiful! I really liked the way you "walked" me through this

SEA

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

6 posted 2001-04-08 09:44 PM

Oh Jennifer, what a beautiful portrayal of marriage, into my library this goes, I loved it!~

Take care,
Melissa~

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-04-08 10:07 PM

Sunnyone - You are welcome and it just came to me one day.  Thank you for reading!

JLR - True love will always endure in my opinion.  Thanks!

Joyce - Thank you!

Kathleen - You know what?  I love the word glorious!!!  Thank you, sweetheart.

SEA - Thanks for sharing the walk.

Melissa - I am honored to have this placed in your library. A very high compliment.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Red-uni
Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 192
Georgia, USA

8 posted 2001-04-09 12:29 PM

Fabulous tribute. Written so very well!!!
Red

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

9 posted 2001-04-09 12:31 PM

I love the way you write about nature. Woods, shoreline, etc. VERY well done!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

10 posted 2001-04-09 04:34 PM

Great outlook on love, great poem!

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

11 posted 2001-04-09 07:19 PM

Red - Thank you very much!!

Interloper - I have been told that nature is my best subject and where my talents shine most.  Who knows, maybe they're right!  Thank you!!

walker - Thanks!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

12 posted 2001-04-10 05:39 AM

My dear LW
You surely so shine in this one, what a beautiful piece...well penned
~HUGS~
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

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