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dreams falling. . . (challenge phrase)
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dreams falling. . . (challenge phrase) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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*thanks for Paula Finn for the phrase*  you've walked in my dreams for almost as long as I've known what love was filling my mind and touching my soul with your beautiful spirit for so long I never believed that you existed that you would always only be in my dreams never to be seen never to be fulfilled never to be loved and now, standing on the outside of the door to your heart I pace and pace finally, taking a deep breath I knock and the door opens to reveal my dream come true but, my dreams fell short of the real you for you surpassed them all ----------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this a lot, Sven... It reminds me a lot of a scene in The Firm where he thinks he's probably screwed his marriage up beyond repair... and she tells him that long before she knew him, she loved a promise of him... and he's kept that promise. *S* Beautiful! |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Sven, I think you have begun to heal. Life is going on. Thank you for sharing. Hugs, ME |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
When the reality of love surpasses the dream...it is ever any better than that? Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
suthern, thank you. . . I'm glad that you enjoyed. . . ME, you're welcome. . .and perhaps you're right about the healing. . . JLR, no it's not my friend. . .thank you. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
beautiful sven.... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Nicolette Fox Junior Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 10Michigan |
Very romantic, sounds like the object of your affection is a lucky one.  ) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
like this a lot |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
So soft and tender are your words written on screen which touch my heart endlessly and what you have penned here in this poem is truly beautiful just thought I'd let ya know... I enjoyed reading this PoetFriendSven... Hugs2u ~coco~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Greeneyes, thank you. . . Nicolette, thank you and welcome!! Now, if you could just let whoever the object of my affection is know this. . . then I'll be happy!! LOL vanadana, thank you my friend. . . PoetFriend Coco, thank you for letting me know. . . and HUGS to you to my wonderful PoetFriend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hey Sven this wil get you everwhere, nice write. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Enjoy! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes....what Sy said....this will get you everywhere.... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice thoughts, Sven, and beautifully worded. Sandra |
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