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Strawberry Curls
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Strawberry Curls |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
From last summer...a concert in the park and two toddlers 'dealing' with each other. Strawberry Curls Virginia Salter Strawberry curls meet baseball cap in the evenin’ of days two feet tall each be eying th’ other surreptitiously she rocks, sways, bounces to the beat he, clutches two rubber balls stands, starin’, on his feet seems that two or forty-two communication of the sexes barely makes it through © July 28, 2000 |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I love children and I love this poem...when you put the two ingredients together you get one huge smile from this girl. Well done. ~*~ I write, therefore I am ~*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This is so cute! It is something most of us have seen when dealing with toddlers and described well. Betty Lou Hebert |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks Sharon and Betty, so happy you got a kick out of this piece. It was a charming inspiration, they were both just adorable! |
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