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SEA
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0 posted 2001-03-24 10:13 PM


He had me
From the moment I looked into his eyes
It didn't take long
For me to realize

His voice~
So soothing……………… so sweet
He would be the only one
To sweep me off my feet

His touch~
So natural to feel
Yet so exciting
With a lover's appeal


His smile~
So charming
completely safe
but quite disarming

His heart~
So loving……........…impossibly
He gives his love
Only to me

He had me
Almost before we met, it seems
He is the one
The man of my dreams
~SEA~


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Balladeer
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1 posted 2001-03-24 10:23 PM


..and that is one lucky man!!!
Dee
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2 posted 2001-03-24 10:25 PM


I like your dreams Sea. Balladeer is right, he is a lucky man.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2001-03-24 10:48 PM


So you been dreaming about Jon Bon Jovi too??? Oh baby...
errr...oh... you mean your hubby lol...
ok...hes got it going on too
great romantic writing here girlie ...
and I wont tell if ya sneak in a Prince dream once in awhile

oh you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
my body aches to breathe your breath
your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

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4 posted 2001-03-24 10:51 PM


*gentle and sweet* Nice one, Sea!

"Often the test of courage is not to die but to live"

~Vittorio Alferi~

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5 posted 2001-03-24 10:59 PM


Balladeer~ *smooch* thank you

Dee~ I think I'm a pretty lucky wife thank you

Janet~ no Bon Jovi in my dreams........but *sigh* yes, I've had some fantastic ones about Prince.........he sings to me........he talks to me........I just melt.......huh, oh yea, I love my husband........ he is awesome! thanks Janet

JAW~ thank you very much

~SEA


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6 posted 2001-03-25 09:33 AM


Ahhhh SEA ... a wonderful tribute to a very fortunate man indeed. Lovely sentiments, very much enjoyed this beautiful render!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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7 posted 2001-03-25 10:20 AM


a lovely dedication!
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8 posted 2001-03-25 11:10 AM


I want this dream!!!!!!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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9 posted 2001-03-25 11:19 AM


SEA~
*Hugs* for this delight !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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PoeticKnight
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10 posted 2001-03-26 09:23 AM


I echo previous sentiments...he better realize, how lucky, lucky, lucky to have you! *S*
inot2B
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11 posted 2001-03-26 09:27 AM


Isn't it nice to wake and find you're living with your DREAM MAN! Enjoyed very much!!!

Jill
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12 posted 2001-03-26 10:13 AM


"He had me almost before we met"

SEA - Love this.....this is how I met mine too. Good one.

Cuddlez
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13 posted 2001-03-26 01:09 PM


If only every one can feel like this...

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

tradewind
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14 posted 2001-03-26 01:17 PM


what a wonderful sentiment!
Sudhir Iyer
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15 posted 2001-03-26 01:19 PM


This is so delightful... SEA ... He is special... so are you...

regards,
sudhir

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16 posted 2001-03-26 02:49 PM


SEA, this is so nice... he must be a great guy to capture the heart of such a sweety.

Parker

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17 posted 2001-04-26 07:42 PM


Keep your dreams,
We all need to keep our dreams, but it's hard to do.
Nice write, i echo  everyone before me
Bernie




A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
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18 posted 2001-04-26 09:22 PM


Makes one reflect back to either their first love...or rekindle warm feelings for their spouse.  It made me reflect on how and where I first saw my husband act on stage. One's life is all but tokens of memories...Latin Passion
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19 posted 2001-04-26 09:30 PM


A lovely poem.  Hope it's is true to your life.  Joyce
Suetang
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20 posted 2001-04-26 09:59 PM


What a beautiful tribute to the one you love.
Thank you......Sue

Suetang

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21 posted 2001-04-26 10:27 PM


nice.  It's good to see that love is still in the air.

Unrequited love sucks.

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