Beneath An April Moon (inspired by Marge Tindal)

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Mysteria

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0 posted 2001-04-08 04:18 AM

Beneath an April Moon
~*Mysteria*~

A moonlit walk along the ocean
brings back the past,
and what was never meant to be.
My heart grows stronger seasoned
over time's unending silence,
some day I will be free.
My past burns like a child's crying,
it will always be part of me.
My future shines like a full moon rising,
which is still to be.
My mind yearns for the light it's finding,
and as if on cue;
My heart longs like a river winding,
beneath this full April moon.

~*~Thanks for the inspiration Marge~*~

Art: ~www.allwall.com~ "Rocky Shoreline"

~*~ I write, therefore I am ~*~

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 04-08-2001).]

KokoStewartKoomoa
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1 posted 2001-04-08 04:32 AM

very nice write. enjoyed this.

Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
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Butterflies_dont_cry
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2 posted 2001-04-08 07:15 AM

This is just beautiful...Marge's inspiration
looks lovely on you...touches of saddness
yet the feeling of hope ran stronger...I
loved this piece~

Sunshine

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3 posted 2001-04-08 09:36 AM

I think I see silver and gold blending....from one poet to another....

a lovely write....

Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-04-08 09:40 AM

it's breathtaking I can't find the right words to express how beautiful this is!

Doug Pretorius
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5 posted 2001-04-08 09:44 AM

Marge rubbed off on you in just the right way Mysteria. This is a lovely poem, thank you for sharing it with us.

Martie

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6 posted 2001-04-08 11:23 AM

Sharon--This is lovely!!

Interloper

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Deep in the heart

7 posted 2001-04-08 11:49 AM

My future shines like a full moon rising,
which is still to be.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
WOW. What 1derful inspiration!

You go, girl.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-04-08 11:56 AM

Mysteria~

~To catch
you in soft glow
of moon is joy to this
heart of mine-to read your
words of light and hope is to
see you in a different shine
Keep the glowing alive in
knowing inspirational
light looks good
on you~

*Love n' hugs~
This just happens to be a beautiful
piece you've written, dear lady.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

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Washington State

9 posted 2001-04-08 12:16 PM

This is truly quite beautiful, Mysteria. May the hurts of the past recede and the beauties come forth. Joyce

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (edited 04-08-2001).]

Bill Charles
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10 posted 2001-04-08 12:20 PM

Mysteria - I love your artwork, and also what you write. Just excellent.

BC

Honeybee
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11 posted 2001-04-08 12:21 PM

So beautiful and reflective~

Take care,
Melissa~

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

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British Columbia, Canada

12 posted 2001-04-08 01:20 PM

Group Hug...WOW! You guys are the greatest! I am going to stay up late more often! I slept in and what a way to wake up - seeing all your

faces shining back at me! I always get melancholy during a full moon actually, and it makes me wonder sometimes what that is all about. I was reading Marge's poem as I looked out the window at the same full moon as she had (but that is a whole other poem - he he). I thought I would write about the fact that full moon's made me very sad and reflective and that tonight was going to be end of that!

Thank you all so much for reading and enjoying it.

And Bill - thank you as someone told me music and art took away from being really poetic or a poet, as those artists had already done all the work for you... so back I will be digging into my graphic world, as it gives me so much pleasure to blend the two, and if it is poetically incorrect that too as of today, means naught!

~*~ I write, therefore I am ~*~

tracie66
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13 posted 2001-04-09 07:26 AM

Oh how beautiful this piece is, you have written this superbly....well done. It's an inspirational piece itself.

Psst I'll let you in on a secret, we're all inspired by Margie

~HUGS~
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Mysteria

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British Columbia, Canada

14 posted 2001-04-09 03:35 PM

Tracie: Psst I too will tell you a secret, she is truly the wind beneath sails...for her words are on the wind as she speaks or writes. Thank you for reading this.

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