Open Poetry #13 |
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Always, A Girl |
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Lady In White![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Always, A Girl struggled mightily to free myself of bonds that be of shy young girl, young woman too, to be a woman through and through a second decade came and went and life was laughingly, lovingly spent a third decade and then a fourth and suddenly life headed north ~*~ and now, now I am wrapped in fine, fine feelings of twine, entwined, a spirit young, meant to be free, held in one less-than-young body and in relate I shall not hesitate to tell you now, just this once that I embody Anne, Anne of Green Gables, vigorous and sprite, and in the writings of her write, I would implore for you to see the young that I would now be, in mind and spirit and in circumstance, I would ask you, give me chance chance to be in body, old, a force within, a force of gold a girl of light with wrinkles, yes… but a woman young with each caress I have heard that men, thus, as well, fall under this mysterious spell, of seeing younger in the mirror when as we should see much more clear but if you will allow me my girlish fling, then, then I could give you…. everything. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is so well done, Lady! I personally can't understand why my father keeps staring back at me every time I look in the mirror! I feel sure you have nothing to worry about...we're not old...we're seasoned ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This poem is nice...James |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
So lovely and why is it that our bodies go before our lively spirit. I swear I am not any older than my granddaughters. Joyce |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
chance to be in body, old, a force within, a force of gold And sometimes tells me a force to be reckoned with...sexy is as sexy does! That is a little something my Grandmother taught me! From one who has reached 1/2 a century let me assure you, I still love me! ![]() |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
LIW~ This is so tender and soft...just as your heart is...beautiful work...simply beautiful~ |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
It is really GREAT..... |
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