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PoetryLuvR
Junior Member

since 2001-07-27

Posts 16
Ca, USA

0 posted 2001-07-27 01:04 AM

I stumble through each morning
and walk against the wind
seeing every present face
turn into that of him

as i twitch and shiver
anxiety runs so deep
i bet that i'd have nightmares
if only i could sleep

but i still see and smell him
feel his warmth on my skin
taste the salt of my silent tears
see him smile as he goes in

I can still feel his sweat
drop bead by bead on my neck
i know that these are feelings
i won't soon forget.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-07-27 08:56 AM

Wow! Great first post! Welcome!

Please check your email for a special greeting!

~SEA

"Four be the things I'd been better without: Love, curiosity, freckles and doubt."
-- Dorothy Parker, on herself

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

2 posted 2001-07-27 10:48 AM

Welcome to Passions!!
Excellent first post

Engel_Dragon_Eyes
New Member

since 2001-07-26

Posts 9

3 posted 2001-07-27 06:36 PM

That was a very intense piece. I can almost relate to it with my ex.

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

4 posted 2001-07-27 09:53 PM

Welcome to DP

--Loved this & will be looking forward to more soon LOVE ELMO <3

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

5 posted 2001-07-28 02:46 AM

This brought tears to my eyes. To me it was about rape and I have experienced that... I loved this. I will be looking out for more... Great Write!!!

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

K2001
Junior Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 31
Near manchester in England

6 posted 2001-07-28 01:57 PM

This is absolutley fantastic....my heart goes out to you, its a long journey which lies ahead and forgetting is never an option i just hope that you have learnt how to be stronger than him and move on.....all my love....K

"Keep the faith"-Jon Bon Jovi

Hellseyes
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 120
Kansas, USA

7 posted 2001-07-28 03:36 PM

this is a great first post.../Drew/

[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 07-30-2001).]

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

8 posted 2001-07-28 07:51 PM

THis was a wonderful first post, though I am sure it was hard for you to write. Were you a victim of a rape or something? Excuse me for being blunt, but this is what it sounds like. Anyway, I cant wait to see more of your work.

I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

PoetryLuvR
Junior Member

since 2001-07-27

Posts 16
Ca, USA

9 posted 2001-07-29 01:28 AM

Thank you for all your kind words everyone. They really mean a lot

And yes, just for the record, this is one of many poems I have written about my rapes. I was in an abusive relationship and during that time I experienced such things. I just feel lucky that I am able to communicate about it through my writing, and more over...get such great and positive responses for it.

thank you all for your support.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

10 posted 2001-07-29 11:36 PM

One of the best parts about this place? Is that you will find as you write about the pain, that you are not alone. Please accept my belated welcome, I understand the nightmare of your memories all too well.

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