Dark Poetry #3 |
Fading |
Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Memories flood my mind flood my heart rip me up. Things I didn't see I wasn't there they don't fade. Times of sorrow of hate of mourning. Fading I see her scream see her cry see her bleed. Hatered is a terrible thing it will eat you up if you let it. Loneliness he took her away he ended her life I hate him. Times of laughter of playing jokes all lost. Fading now she is gone he took her away and her memory's fading. in memory of Jesica A. Young. Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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DarkenedShadow Member
since 2001-07-23
Posts 114Kansas |
Wow the power here was amazing and the way it seemed that without the part of hatred... it wouldn't seem so complete but thats my thought. /Nick/ |
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Dark Poet Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 99North Carolina, USA |
This is a wonderful poem. I love it. The images are so vivid in each stanza. James |
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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
thats very kool, nad to tip it all off it was dedicated to someone...nick shut the hell up./Drew/ |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
I liked the way it went from stanza to stanza very good job. -Neala |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Alyssa ~ Another awesome tribute to Jesica. *hugs* What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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