Dark Poetry #3 |
Missing You |
Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I'm missing you, but you're not gone, you're still here w/ me. I'm missing you, missing the way we were, the way we still are. I'm missing you, but you didn't leave, I'm the one who left. I'm missing you, and it's my fault, I screw up everything. I'm missing you, when I wake up alone, without you by my side. I'm missing you, when you're not home, and I called to just say hey. I'm missing you, b/c I'm the screw up, it's always been that way. I'm missing you, and I know you know, but do you miss me? Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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DarkenedShadow Member
since 2001-07-23
Posts 114Kansas |
If this is as personal as I took it then, I'm sure you're not to blame. This poem brings thoughts of somebody I know and they usualy feel the same way. I liked reading this... but hey its alright don't bash yourself. /Nick/ |
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Dark Poet Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 99North Carolina, USA |
Very nice indeed. Thank you for sharing, I enjoyed reading and your feelings came across beautifully. James |
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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
that peice went straight to the heart.... i love seeing your work../Drew/ |
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